Title :  The Consequence of Revenge

Author :  Rachel Van Dyken

Release Date :  June 9th, 2015






After losing his best friend to another guy, the notoriously too-confident Max Emory suddenly feels lost. He may have devastatingly good looks, an abundance of charm, and a claim to one of the biggest hotel empires around, but he has no ambition anymore. So when his fed-up friends decide they’ve had enough of his moping, they sign him up to be the next bachelor on the reality series Love Island. And between his pride and his forged signature on an ironclad contract, Max just can’t say no.

Now he’s stranded in paradise with twenty-four women, one terrifying goat, and Becca, the breathtaking barista who already turned him down back home. The closer Max gets to Becca, the more determined he becomes to win her over. As she gets to know him better, things start heating up. But is Becca really after Max’s heart—or is she after the cash prize she could claim once the cameras stop rolling?







* A review copy was provided by the author via Netgalley for the Blog Tour *

~ 4 Stars ~

If you are looking for a fun, sweet, not a lot of drama, and a laugh out loud book, then this series is one you should definitely pick up.

The Consequence of Revenge is the second book in Rachel Van Dyken’s Consequence Series and not unlike book 1 in this series, this book was filled with laughs and shenanigans through out the whole book. I have to say that I enjoyed this book just as much as the first book and I really liked Max in both books. He is just so funny, real and swoony (when he wants to be 😉 ) I will say that, still, my only negative with this book was that at times I thought the shenanigans were a little to over the top and just felt like some of the things wouldn’t happen in real life and were just too unbelievable. But I still enjoyed this story and the characters.

If you are a fan of The Bachelor tv show, then you will want to read Max’s story. The storyline of this book follows that theme. This book is a stand-alone but to get the true feeling of the characters, I would suggest that you read The Consequence of Loving Colton first. You meet Max in that book and all of the other characters that play a part in this story. It will definitely give you the dynamic of this group of friends.

One thing I really liked with this book was, even though I have read many books with the Bachelor theme, this book was done differently. Yes Max does have to “date” other girls but that isn’t the focus of the story and even after he is committed to Becca, you can tell he was only seeing the other girls to fulfill his obligation. I liked that even though this is a “dating” game show type story, it really didn’t turn into a love triangle, like I have seen in other books. I truly felt the connection between Becca and Max. I have to be honest and say I wasn’t thrilled about the little drama she added on the final show at the Ceremony, but I get why she did and I was glad it all worked out in the end.

This is definitely a series I will continue to read and I can’t wait for Reid’s book. I am looking forward to what the author will bring to the table for Reid. I think I am looking forward to his book the most.

So if you are in the mood to laugh your butt off, but still fall in love with some really great characters…..then this is the book/series for you. Definitely one I would recommend!!!!





“Have you been sexually active in the past six months?” The doctor sniffed and started pulling out supplies, laying them across the table. I watched in horror as visions of getting abducted by aliens danced like sugarplums in my head.

People die from fear.

It could happen.

I read stories where people would just spontaneously combust.

And it was about to happen if the heat in my body and all-around shaking were any indicator.

“I have to—” Jason ran toward the door and slammed it behind him.

“Weak stomach?” The doctor chuckled.

“He’s afraid of my nakedness—makes him feel like less of a man.”

“O-okay.” The doctor laughed again and motioned for me to turn around. “Now, drop your pants to your knees.”

Let it be known that no man. NO MAN should ever hear those words from someone who could pass as his great-grandfather.

The cold air bit my ass as I turned and waited.

“Now, bend over.”


I did as he said, cursing Jason and all his future children.

“Now, this may be cold.”

Just let it be small.

“And a bit painful, it’s totally normal to experience some discomfort.”

“Ha-ha.” I laughed dryly. “Guess we know what it means if it’s comfortable, am I right, Doc?”

And silence.

Worst thing to say when you have your pants at your ankles and the doctor’s about two seconds away from making you see stars. Where were the drugs?

“Now try not to tense up.”

Ha, seriously?

“Here we go.”

Oh. God. Did he need to count down?

“Turn your head and—cough.”

“Mother of God!” I shouted, hitting my hands against the metal table as the doctor made his intentions perfectly clear.

“Cough!” he shouted.

“Stop yelling at me!”

“I’m not yelling!”

“I want to go home now.”

“Almost done!” The doctor laughed uncomfortably.

I choked when he removed his digits from my special place. I had one of those moments, the kind where you feel so used you’re not sure whether you should cry or laugh.

“All right! You can put your pants back on.”

I felt ashamed. Like I’d just been screwed and not even offered dinner for my gallant efforts in the bedroom. Holy shit, was this what girls felt like after one-night stands?

Where the hell were my flowers?

At least give me a sucker or something . . . maybe a sticker? Saying I got . . . never mind. Those types of stickers were probably illegal.

“Now.” The doc took off his gloves and washed his hands.


He put on a new pair.

And the torture train just kept tooting.

Ha, tooting, see, it’s funny because . . . never mind.

“I’ll just need to draw some blood.” He pulled out a giant-ass needle and I had one of those moments that I’m sure every five-year-old experiences right before his mom holds him down while he gets a needle in the ass.


“This won’t hurt a bit.” He laughed nervously.


I winced as he pricked my arm and started drawing blood. His lips were moving but I wasn’t really catching anything.

“All donnne.” His voice was low. Why was he talking so slow?

“Youuu cannn gooo noowww.”

I shook my head and tried to go to the door but was met with total blackness before I took two steps.

The last thought in my head?

I was trapped in a room with a man who’d just seen my Mighty Max. I hoped to God he hadn’t liked it.



Other Books in Series :



The Consequence of Loving Colton  (Book 1)

It’s all fun and games…until someone’s heart is broken.

They’re not kids anymore, but Milo Caro is certain that Colton Mathews will only see her as his best friend’s little sister for the rest of their lives. After all, he made that clear the night before she left for college. But four years later, her brother is getting married and Colt’s the best man—and guess who is the best man’s last-minute date?

Milo vows to use the wedding to either claim the smoldering firefighter’s heart or douse this torch for good. When Max—her best friend from college, who may be carrying a torch of his own—crashes the party, they devise a plan to make Colt see what he’s missing. But after Colt catches on, he decides to cook up his own revenge.

Now it’s personal. Colt and Milo are at war, and between Max’s questionable acting methods, an unfortunate trip to jail, and a maniacal fiancée, what could possibly go right?





Rachel Van Dyken is the New York Times, Wall Street Journal, and USA Today Bestselling author of regency and contemporary romances. When she’s not writing you can find her drinking coffee at Starbucks and plotting her next book while watching The Bachelor.
She keeps her home in Idaho with her Husband and their snoring Boxer, Sir Winston Churchill. She loves to hear from readers! You can follow her writing journey at

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